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The following is a piece of writing submitted by katiedarling- on March 25, 2011
"I wrote this a long while ago, but I figured that my readers would enjoy it, so here you are. Read on. "

I want to give you the universe

I want to give you the universe.

We can cup it in our hands like rainwater.

We'll look at it and smile in wonder at each other because when you look at the galaxies and the stars and the planets from so far away it really is beautiful.

And I'll tell you that you're so much more beautiful that what we're seeing in each of our hands.

Yeah, what we're holding is pretty, and calming, and wonderous...but you're way more beautiful, and breathtaking, and absolutely wonderful that it is.

You're more than just a face, or a body.

You're more than just flaws and imperfection.

You're just more.

I want to give you the universe, because I want you to realize that you mean more than it to me, that you are more beautiful than it to me, that you are just a part of me that won't ever be detached.

I want to give you the universe because I love you.

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