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The following is a piece of writing submitted by katiedarling- on May 6, 2011

I love you.

I love you.
I love you like the moon loves the sun.
The sun and the moon encircle each other and embrace.
Fire and ice unite and collide, so different, yet burning the same.
I feel so cold, hands shaking, palms sweating.
But when you kiss me, I get so warm, my heart melting and turning into millions of butterflies.
They take flight inside my veins, vibrating and stumbling over one another.
Racing to the finish, the moment my heart skips a beat.
The beat, the beat of your heart keeps me alive.
And when I'm with you, I feel so alive.
I feel so free, like the wind.
The breeze blowing between the trees.
My feet crunch the leaves, the leaves that have fallen, like snow.
Snow, what I think of when I see your skin, so pale, porcelain.
A glass doll, so breakable.
Your heart is so breakable.
When I look at you, a million thoughts bloom in my mind.
And when I try to describe you, I end up with hundreds of crumpled balls of paper.
Paper, I write my emotion on paper, leaving those pieces of me places where you will find them.
Spontaneous, oh how I love to be spontaneous, and when I'm with you I don't know what I'm going to do.
And sometimes I think, what am I going to do with you?
When you act silly, making me laugh, and look at you with passion in my eyes.
Passion, sweet passion, a forbidden fruit I must eat.
Eat, I could eat you up, I love you so.
I love you.
The light in your eyes makes me shiver.
When you look at me, I feel like I'm melting.
I melt when you touch me.
I melt beneath your fingers, they know me like no one else.
I know you.
I know you, I know your past just by each story you tell me.
I know your future.
Your future is with me, in this bed, naked.
Our bodies mix together, and soon enough I don't know where I am, or where you are.
Where are we?
We are here, standing still, together.
Together we fight.
We fight through life as so many confusing and scary things are thrown at us.
And when I first saw you in that hallwayat school, I knew.
I knew I was immediately thrown into a pit filled with angry lions.
The lions ate me alive with love.
Love, I love you.
I could say it a million times, but the words will stay deep.
They burrow themselves right down to my soul.
My soul, that lies just behind my ribcage, and vibrates surrounded with the light you put inside of me.
And when I look at you, I know it's true.
I know with every sinew of my body.
I love you.

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