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The following is a piece of writing submitted by Maria on May 15, 2011
"What would you do if you got your heart broken for the first time ever by a boy that you thought was truly the one for you? Cry for a while and let time heal it? Well, then answer this next question: What would you do if that guy was also going out with two of your best friends? Cry a little longer perhaps? Maybe end your friendship with those two friends of yours?

Well, that's exactly what Saphire Stonez did. She had her heart broken by a guy, named William Dunbar; to her William Dumbar. She found out that her two best friends ever - one named Yumi Ishiyama and the other her cousin, Aelita Schaeffer - who were both oblivious to the fact that there was more than one girl in William's life. Not only did Saphire cry, but she also took a drastic decision. Her decision changed her whole life for the worse.

Now, you must be wondering this: how can one boy, plus one little decision cause so much mayhem in Saphire's life. Well, to find out you're just going have to read from the beginning to the end."

The Healings of a Broken Heart

Saphire's POV:

It has been a few weeks since Yumi, Aelita, and I figured out the truth about William. Yumi and Aelita soon got over it, because Yumi had Ulrich for support and Aelita had Jeremie. But, I, I had no one. I would sometimes accompany them when they went on dates or double dates, but I always felt like a third wheel around them. And seeing them all happy, just made me even sadder. Also, Sissi just got eviler and meaner by the day. Her constant teasing and taunting were always somehow aimed at me. And what's worse is that William kept trying to get back with me. He never tried that with Yumi or Aelita, because they had someone. But, people say it's because William liked me the best and I was the easiest.

Aelita was smart, but also very naive. Why William didn't try to get her, I don't know. Yumi was strong and not so easy to break down. But, I was the easiest, because from the outside I may look tough, but on the inside I am very soft. And so much torture from Sissi and William can really change a person. It can really hurt them and break their heart into a zillion pieces. It would take a normal person forever to piece it all back together like a puzzle piece. But, it took a certain person such a short amount of time. I believe it's because he was an angel in disguise of a person. And his name is...

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