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Writing Resources from Fifteen Minutes of Fiction


The following is a piece of writing submitted by ramith on May 30, 2011
"I'm an year 8 student.I actually wrote this piece in exactly 15 mins but I'm a slow-typer."

the unknow darkness

I gripped hard,very hard."Don't worry dad"I whispered in the dark light.
30 mins earlier.......
The sun shone brightly on my face as white clouds came from th other direction."Today is the best weather for a day of relaxation mate."dad spoke leaning back.Suddenly a noise of thunder overpowered our ears,"or maybe not!"

It was about fifteen minutes later when our little shack caught on fire, by a single stroke of lightning."Great, where the hell are we gonna sleep toninght?"he rhetorically asked.But we both knew the answer.

"The hotel in the town is is twenty five km's away!"I shouted into my dad's ears under the loud noise of the engine."I know" he replied.

" swoop swoop swoop swoop!"the vipers worked hard against the blistering rain.I swallowed hard as I glared out the window at the steep cliff.

"keek......" our old,rusty car slided dangerously against the edge as I opened the door and grabbed on to a cut-off tree quickly holdinding my dad's hands.

The old Toyota dissapeared down into the darkness.I gripped my dad below me with one hand."I love you" dad said his last words,letting go of my hands."No.........".Tears bust into my closed eyes.

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